Žad
Milan Vincetič
Na kameli
iz lesa
v votli grbi
iz neba
jezdi troje modrih
prvi nosi
šest drobtin
drugi mirte
suhi dim
tretji skrinjico
iz žada
brez kraljička
ker da kaka
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Hy guys, I’m chopping my teddy bear, just for fun.
A good one. If not anything else, this is a good try at bringing out dynamics of humorous, spatial and mythologic synthesises of different symbolic registres in a poetic discourse.
Of course, I’m not going to bi the first to actually ‘like’ it.